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Sana's avatar

I ... Um... Had to pause after every stanza and look around. How can you write something so well that you haven't even experienced? It was overwhelmingly beautiful. All the rhymes were natural, full of meaning, like the last puzzle sliding into its position.

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Rich's avatar

I’m honestly still don’t know how I did it, I just wrote as the lines came to me. I still wonder who I channelled but I guess I’ll never know, but I’m sure it’s someone’s story out there, somewhere.

thanks for taking the time to read it Sana, it means a lot 🫶✨

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Karina's avatar

Everything you wrote are thoughts that I actually have regularly and you expressed them better than I ever could. It’s rare to find someone who has different perspectives and that can understand those things and that’s why you’re an amazing writer🧸

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Adùnní's avatar

Beautiful!

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Sanya's avatar

This was very well written rich.

You played words like a mvp with this

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Rich's avatar

Thanks sanya, means a lot. Honestly 🥲🫶✨

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virelle 💌's avatar

so beautifully written, i felt every word

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Rich's avatar

🥹🫶✨

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