I'm not able to quote it, probably because Substack lately has stopped allowing lines that don't look like a full para lately. I don't know but it's been happening. But I just loved this para and the one with saying she got the degree but not fulfillment.
"Stayed by my phone the past few weeks,
I’m losing your scent on these unwashed sheets,
With each notification my heart skips a beat,
I just wonder why’d you do this, how could I be so foolish…"
This was such a beautiful poem and you did it really well in this one.
Yh whenever I use the poetry text block thing you can’t restack it or quote highlighted text for some reason they need to fix that but oh well. And I think that last segment is my favourite or the Oceanside wedding there’s so many I honestly surprised myself with this one
I'm not able to quote it, probably because Substack lately has stopped allowing lines that don't look like a full para lately. I don't know but it's been happening. But I just loved this para and the one with saying she got the degree but not fulfillment.
"Stayed by my phone the past few weeks,
I’m losing your scent on these unwashed sheets,
With each notification my heart skips a beat,
I just wonder why’d you do this, how could I be so foolish…"
This was such a beautiful poem and you did it really well in this one.
Every line was flowing with emotion.
Loved it really.
Yh whenever I use the poetry text block thing you can’t restack it or quote highlighted text for some reason they need to fix that but oh well. And I think that last segment is my favourite or the Oceanside wedding there’s so many I honestly surprised myself with this one
Truly. This was wonderful:))