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Jenny Lynn's avatar

That was a deep look into your soul. You have a gift for poetry. Poetry is cathartic. Keep writing it. It will bring your soul much solace.

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Rich's avatar

thanks and will do it has done so much of that already

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Shark's avatar

WHO HURT RICHY

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Rich's avatar

Just a piece of my soul little one

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Sarah Rose's avatar

“By expectations I’m bound—

I’m caged.” This is the hardest feeling to get around sometimes

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Zalayka Azam's avatar

exasperated

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Figglebottom's avatar

"Our social groups

Begin to fade—

From hanging out every day

To going our separate ways."😭

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Ameliorating A's avatar

Tbh, I feel like getting it printed and keep it's copy near my desk.. This is just painfully and truly beautiful.. I got really lucky finding this poem today.

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Rich's avatar

I’m glad it resonated with you my friend 🙂‍↕️🫶

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amber.'s avatar

This is beautiful; painful. You have a gift. 🤍

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Alex Jenkin's avatar

Sad one dude.. really captured an aspect of male loneliness in this. Great poem ❤️

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Rich's avatar

That was the goal bro as men we all experience it

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Alex Jenkin's avatar

Definitely, good on you for making it present in the discussion

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Kyle Angelo Galendez's avatar

I hear you man!

...you desire to be seen, understood, and loved.

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